I would probably fix up the formatting a little bit, e.g. this was all one line:
Client: Bath and North East Somerset Council Nov 2013 — Feb 2016 Projects:Headless Drupal Smart TV kiosks, Drupal Intranet.
Also I was a bit confused by this:
My last project with B&NES Council before closing my business was
Since this is the first time you mention having a business so I feel like it's lacking a bit of context.
(I'm not a recruiter so take this with a grain of salt, but I think the descriptions could probably also be condensed a little bit too. I think you can get it down to 2 pages).
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I would probably fix up the formatting a little bit, e.g. this was all one line:
Also I was a bit confused by this:
Since this is the first time you mention having a business so I feel like it's lacking a bit of context.
(I'm not a recruiter so take this with a grain of salt, but I think the descriptions could probably also be condensed a little bit too. I think you can get it down to 2 pages).