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Tamir

"Welcome to my page" doesn't does anything and yet it covers about 65% of page in mobile, maybe add something which shows you provide value to your visitor some pitch line. Another thing is you are using same colour in paragraphs as well to highlight main words which are same as heading problem is they both competing for attention I don't know where to look first, color in paragraph should be different, maybe same family and lighter shades, or different color which complements your main theme color, other than that more issues are already mentioned,
Happy fixing.

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Billibear

Cool, that's good idea!