I'd say the number one thing for me is quick readability — because nobody wants to spend much time figuring out the page.
It's not immediately clear that "Web Lock" is the subject of the page. It's a little too small – and should probably be bold. The "subheader" being above the main header might work, but it's also a bit confusing.
Overall I'd bold the headers where possible and add more overall spacing between different headers, subheaders, paragraphs. Everything is a little condensed.
The header could maybe use a quick visual of the "lock" idea — but I'm not sure what exactly to offer.
You should come back and post after you've made any changes you get from feedback!
Very clean and enjoyable page.
I'd say the number one thing for me is quick readability — because nobody wants to spend much time figuring out the page.
It's not immediately clear that "Web Lock" is the subject of the page. It's a little too small – and should probably be bold. The "subheader" being above the main header might work, but it's also a bit confusing.
Overall I'd bold the headers where possible and add more overall spacing between different headers, subheaders, paragraphs. Everything is a little condensed.
The header could maybe use a quick visual of the "lock" idea — but I'm not sure what exactly to offer.
You should come back and post after you've made any changes you get from feedback!
Thanks a lot, ben. I will consider all the points you've mentioned.