I'd say I got the gist within a few seconds. My eyes went to the main text pretty quickly and it basically got the point across.
The screenshots do not provide any additional help, so a graphic which helped tie things together might aid me in getting to the selling proposition a bit faster.
There are a lot of different re-phrasings of some of the value prop throughout the page, and I do like this one in particular:
Wrap your existing database in a CRUD API in seconds
Thx Ben, do you think the text is repeating itself too often? Or is it OK? I suspect the one you liked the most is the version that is the most concise and clear ...
... maybe I should try to avoid repetition as much? Thoughts ...?
We've got more things to play upon, but I didn't want to confuse with "too many USPs" initially ...
We tried to keep it to 3 main things, and then "sprinkle" some more further down below the fold ...
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I'd say I got the gist within a few seconds. My eyes went to the main text pretty quickly and it basically got the point across.
The screenshots do not provide any additional help, so a graphic which helped tie things together might aid me in getting to the selling proposition a bit faster.
There are a lot of different re-phrasings of some of the value prop throughout the page, and I do like this one in particular:
Thx Ben, do you think the text is repeating itself too often? Or is it OK? I suspect the one you liked the most is the version that is the most concise and clear ...
... maybe I should try to avoid repetition as much? Thoughts ...?
We've got more things to play upon, but I didn't want to confuse with "too many USPs" initially ...
We tried to keep it to 3 main things, and then "sprinkle" some more further down below the fold ...