re: Résumé critique thread VIEW POST


I'll start by saying I'm not super confident in any of my criticism, but I'll give some feedback.

Since you repeat the technology used in each part, perhaps you could make that the first point of each section and then maybe a summary at the end. It's also a bit wordy. Is it necessary to say "Develop CRUD (create, read, update, delete) web applications. I think "Develop web applications" is probably enough.

BTW, I'm also from Nova Scotia!

Yeah, I'm struggling a bit with how to approach the tech stacks with each job. Current format with wordier descriptions was to accommodate applications to non-dev shops (and for the benefit of non-techie managers, etc.). However, I largely agree, it would be nice to improve brevity and add some higher impact statements in the freed up space.

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