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leob • Edited

Well, first and foremost I want to say, I like it!

Yes, you copied 100% of the structure of scotttolinski.com but who cares ... the end result looks completely different.

What I like about it is that it's simple and minimalistic, it doesn't look like your average Bootstrap-based website. It does look quite fresh and 'different' from most corporate/professional websites, and on the other hand it doesn't look "amateur".

(see some minor points below)

I'd even go as far as asking if I may use this as an inspiration for my own website! It did inspire me to finally get something up on the web.

May I ask if you used any CSS 'framework' for the website? Quite obviously not Bootstrap, but maybe something lightweight like skeleton.css or basscss.com/ or whatever (there are dozens of them).

(Oh by the way I see the answer already, this probably comes out of the box with 'Gatsby' ...)

Having said that, yes there are some minor flaws ... most of which others mentioned too already, but anyway:

1) Use one and only one font/typeface, and choose a sans serif typeface ... right now I see at least 2 fonts mixed (a serif one and a sans serif one). Sans serif is better readable on screen/web.

2) I noticed that the text on the home page is not as legible as it could be ... the letters are quite faint, are you using opacity or a very light color? Make them darker or give them more contrast.

3) On the other pages (about etc) the blue font in the title bar is very high contrast and not pleasant on the eye, making it less readable ... I'd use white or grey or something like that.

4) In general you should look at your color scheme, try to make it consistent ... why are you using a dark background on the 'About' page and a light background on the other pages?

I think I'd make the title bar less dark (not black, but grey or dark grey) and the rest of the page consistently light grey, or maybe even just white (when the home page loads and the video is not there yet you can now see the title bar 'jumping' from black to grey before the video loads).

5) "Responsive" seems to work, whether intentionally or not (no 'hamburger' which I would say is good, in this case) ... the only thing I noticed is that if I make my browser smaller (narrower) then at some point the video gets rotated 90 degrees ... is that by design? (could be)

As far as I could see the website works fine on all major browsers (Chrome, FF, Safari ... IE/Edge and mobile not tested).

The video on the home page is a little bit slow to load on a slower connection, but it does give a nice personal touch. Is that a video showing yourself?

One thing I wondered about is why you need something like React for a website as simple as this. But I know the answer already, this is just how 'Gatsby' works!

All in all cool piece of work and what I like most is that it's lean and simple, no unnecessary fluff!
And I'm interested in checking out Gatsby, never heard of it.