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Jordan Hewitt

There is some good information here, but surely you could get an English speaker to proofread / edit your copy. Reading this is pretty bad.

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Ahmed Atef • Edited

I Certain all the information here is very clear, and if you find any sentence difficult to understand or read, show me its place and I will try to improve it to be better. Finally, thank you for your note.

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Jordan Hewitt • Edited

There are a ton of grammatical errors and word omissions. It’s missing a lot of articles, transitive verbs, and correct verb conjugations. I can extract the general information for the most part, but no, it is not very clear, and it is very jarring to read. Essentially every sentence needs to be read twice. Simply having an English speaker rewrite it would take your articles to another level and probably improve your English.

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Ahmed Atef

Ok.

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