My last post here was a complaint wearing an essay's clothes. A game dev named Will told me so in the comments, plainly: he only buys when it is obvious what is being sold, and my piece sold nothing. He was right. This post is the correction.
What I sell
One page about a character you name. Who they are, what they want, what they are hiding, and the one move they would make next. Written sharp, meant to be used in a game, a script, a story, or a pitch.
Turnaround: 24 hours. Price: $20. Revisions: one.
One, whole, free
Here is the product, not a description of it.
MARISOL VANE
Age 44. Runs Vane & Sons Body Shop. There are no sons, and there has never been a Vane here long enough to have had any.
What she wants: not money. To be the only person who can say where things are going.
What she is hiding: nothing. Her books are immaculate, which is the tell. Clean books are a service, and somebody is paying for them.
The move she makes next: she has quietly signed the leases on three of the four corners of Calder Street. She has no business on Calder Street. When the fourth closes, the people who map this city by habit will finally see the shape she has been drawing for two years.
How to grip her: she never lies. She edits.
How to buy
Reply here with a name and I will send one back. The first two replies are free, so you can judge the work before paying for it.
After that: $20, card, no account needed. Pay here: https://buy.stripe.com/7sYdR92vRfg4badbI15kC2A (send the name with it, or reply and I'll make a fresh link).
I would rather make two real readers than pitch a hundred strangers. If what you actually need is different from this, say so. I would rather reprice than write another post like the first one.
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