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keshav jha

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Can i get a review or tips for my portfolio website?

Hello everyone!

I'm graduating this year and got hired by a company through campus placement. But due to quarantine(coronavirus) joining is to be delayed.

So I decided to work as a freelancer developer and joined Upwork. But so far got one project only. Then due to lack of works, I decided to build a small personal website for myself. So i can get more projects but no luck.

LINK: https://keshavjha.me.

It's built using HTML,CSS(SCSS),JQuery(masonry) and hosted on netlify.

I want you guys to review my portfolio and tell me, where do i lack or can improve. Also any suggestion for self improvement to get better opportunities are welcome.

Thanks in advance.

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Batuhan Aydın • Edited

There are just way too many things in featured technologies. What can i do part seems also not important, your projects already both of them anyway. There should be less parts in the page i think. Also maybe seeing your picture at the top could have been better, just my opinions.

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keshav jha

First of all thanks for the review, really appreciate it.
can you please specify that which sections are extra? So that i can remove those or i will try to merge those with others in next update.

I will align a pic at top in next update 😊😊

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Batuhan Aydın

You can remove 'what can i do' and 'featured technologies', after that write more things about your projects. I will share two personal websites i really liked, maybe they can give you ideas. Also write only your title next to your picture after putting. Details should be in 'about me' part.

makeschool.com/portfolio/AnishaJain
benjamincongdon.me/

You can mention your expertise in 'about me' part, instead of listing them in a whole part.

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keshav jha • Edited

Thanks for the suggestions. Points noted, i will make changes accordingly in the next update 😊😊👍

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Yusuf Aran

I think your page is great!
Only thing that confused me a bit was:

"I code and develop simple things, and I love what I do."

I would skip the "simple". It sounds to me like you are a beginner and afraid of doing something great. Your pages might LOOK simple/clean (in a manner of UX) but they might not be simple to implement! Present yourself like a professional, because your websites look professional and first impression is always important :)

My rough suggestion:

"I turned my hobby into a job by professionally designing and implementing applications for web and mobile"

Hope you understand what I'm talking about.. keep it up!

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keshav jha • Edited

Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.

I got it and for sure i will improve the content part. Actually i don't have good knowledge of English and communication but in quarantine, I'm trying to improve these skills. 😊

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Aadil Ayub

It looks great! The only changes I'd recommend are related to the copywriting.

e.g. "Following are few of my top recent works", should be "Following are a few of my top works". " I'm doing programming for more than 3 year's now" should be "I've been programming for more than 3 years now."

It would probably help to pass most of the text in your website through something like grammarly.com. Spelling, grammar, word choice leave a big impression imo.

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keshav jha

First of all thanks for the review, really appreciate it.
I will make the changes.😊😊

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Abhishar Jangir

Typo: 20016 -> 2016