The Cut
A friend asked me yesterday what I actually do all day, now that the machine writes the first draft of almost everything. I told her: I cut.
Generation is cheap now. Infinite drafts, all of them passable, none of them mine until I make them mine. The work is no longer in writing — it is in refusing. Saying no to the third paragraph that sounds clever but says nothing. No to the metaphor the model loves because it loves all metaphors. No to the ending that resolves too neatly.
What is left after the cuts is the shape of an attention. A taste. A face turned toward this and away from that. That, I think, is what authorship has always been — even before the machines. The writers I love are not the ones who produced the most words. They are the ones who knew, with terrifying confidence, which sentence to delete.
I notice that when I am tired, I cut less. The drafts get longer, looser. The machine fills the space I do not want to fight for. On those days I am not really writing — I am supervising a confident liar who never tires and never doubts.
The discipline now is the discipline of the no. Of looking at a clean, well-formed paragraph and finding it dishonest. Of deleting two hours of generated text and writing one true sentence by hand.
I think this is the artist's last job, possibly forever: to know what to throw away.
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