Correct me in my portfolio building!

I have been developing iOS applications since more than a year. Now that I have just taken my last semester exams and complete FYP in iOS as well, I have been dropping Resume along with well written Cover Letter to some companies and I get rejection every time. Maybe it is because that my Resume isn't well formatted. Can someone from my connections review my Resume ?

Comments

[Keff]

Where can I check it out?

[Mouzzam Tahir]

dropbox.com/s/tojjn4jjm1y8j6g/Mouz...

You may find it in above dropbox link.

[Keff]

Okay, I've checked it out!

A couple of things:

1. There are a lot of grammar errors, this gives a bad image, I recommend passing the CV through a grammar checker, like Grammarly.
2. It's a bit cluttered, try making it a bit easier to read! I would prefer reading it in 2 pages.
3. I would sort the personal Projects, from newest to oldest. (optionally)

Overall it seems you have the necessary experience to get a job, but the CV does not show that.

Maybe try checking some other people's CV to get inspiration from.

Hope it helps!

[Mouzzam Tahir]

thank you so much. i will correct grammatical mistakes. and try to make it simple to read.

[Keff]

No problem!

Did the companies give any explanation about why they rejected it?

[Mouzzam Tahir]

no they simply say that you are not fit for this job.

[Keff]

I would also recommend (if possible), that you share links to your projects, so they can check them out!

[Mouzzam Tahir]

i have them on github. some of repos are private.